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Music => Musicians' Section => Topic started by: Spacebar on July 09, 2005, 02:21:49 am

Title: ooo oo i wrote a songggg
Post by: Spacebar on July 09, 2005, 02:21:49 am
i wrote a song ;D...i most likely got my initial inspiration from Ghost and multiple other MaSu songs (you may find reference to them but i shows how much i like MaSu :-*) ok i'll stop blabbering and write it
i call it Stupefied but if you want me to make changes to it tell me  :P

Frozen blood in my viens
Sometime I'll wreck these chains
These chains that bind me
keep me so blindly...
Stupefied

My life kept in the dark
away from prying eyes
Always on the move always in disguise
never leaving my true mark

Many think I'm crazy
My eyes always hazy
But please hear me out
Because without a doubt...
I'm Stupefied

My life kept in the dark
away from prying eyes
Always on the move, always in disguise
never leaving my true mark

Sometimes I dream
Just makes me wanna scream
(just makes me wanna scream)


what do yall think? lol i dont care if you all hate it :-\
Title: Re: ooo oo i wrote a songggg
Post by: Jack Lupino on July 09, 2005, 02:54:52 am
hmm...

i like the rhyme skills in the first verse, make a song and record !
Title: Re: ooo oo i wrote a songggg
Post by: Spacebar on July 09, 2005, 05:20:21 am
yay someone likes thnx a lot man...i was gettin random verses all day..took me awhile to get em all down
Title: Re: ooo oo i wrote a songggg
Post by: H on July 20, 2005, 02:55:47 am
I likes :) Especially the 2nd verse. Where is starts out "My life kept in the dark..."

Good stuff **thumbs up** ;D
Title: Re: ooo oo i wrote a songggg
Post by: SpeedD on July 23, 2005, 06:00:45 am
I just love the word Stupefied. It's a great word.
Title: Re: ooo oo i wrote a songggg
Post by: MDX on July 23, 2005, 02:38:57 pm
Good song too :)

Disturbed - Stupify