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Offline L'homme magique

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Re:A poem i wrote..
« Reply #45 on: September 28, 2004, 11:38:35 pm »
and what drugs DO you do? =)
Bah! Caught me before I edited it proper.
"It's like growing up reading good books or listening to good music. One good sofa breeds another good sofa; one bad sofa breeds another bad sofa. That's how it goes."

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Re:A poem i wrote..
« Reply #46 on: September 28, 2004, 11:41:26 pm »
*sniff*

nobody commented on my poem.. i feel pain inside..

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Re:A poem i wrote..
« Reply #47 on: September 28, 2004, 11:43:02 pm »
I don't do [color=330000]many[/color] drugs.

LOL. Encryptic!

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Re:A poem i wrote..
« Reply #48 on: September 29, 2004, 12:21:17 am »
magicmans gettign smarter!
The basic instincts of all guys in the wild:
1) Get big sticks
2) SMASH THE SHISTA OUT OF THINGS
3) Make fire
4) Burninate

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Re:A poem i wrote..
« Reply #49 on: September 29, 2004, 12:21:51 am »
*sighsniff*

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Re:A poem i wrote..
« Reply #50 on: September 29, 2004, 12:27:35 am »
I thought your poem was really good. A good rhythm to it.  I used to think I was good but you guys have all proven me wrong. Love posting my poetry though, not many people see it otherwise.

This one's about that guy I have a crush on. Sexiest. Guy. Ever!

Blood-stained Wings
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I hate you.
Envy your ignorance.
Didn't you notice I was climbing the walls?
Couldn't you tell my eyes were alight?
You're such a whore for them.
Nothing more than a quick-thrill pretty boy.
Did it never cross your mind?
Did you never seek to uncover my silence?
Deaf, blind and mute.
Thats the way you made me.
The way you stood smiling,
Knowing how beautiful you are.
Flaunt yourself for them.
Little girls are quick to please, quick to beg.
I could show you the beauty of blood.
That flash of fur and ache in your knees.
Don't you ever wonder if I know who you are?
Don't you even realise that I'm bound to you?
That you burn in my blood,
That you've stolen my memories and burned your image to my eyes?
If you dare speak then I'm yours to command.
I hate you.
Envy the way you're just
So.
Fucking.
Perfect.

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Re:A poem i wrote..
« Reply #51 on: September 29, 2004, 12:30:27 am »
Raw n hardkore :O i love it.

Way tuu rawk with the lyrical writinginging =)

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Re:A poem i wrote..
« Reply #52 on: September 29, 2004, 12:42:32 am »
Sorry MDX, I only just read your poem. It is real good, ney, brilliant. Very deep and dark. Nice.

Valentine, yours is cool too, but WHO is the guy?!!

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Re:A poem i wrote..
« Reply #53 on: September 29, 2004, 12:43:11 am »
all your poems make mine inadequate.. i am not worthy!! :-\

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Re:A poem i wrote..
« Reply #54 on: September 29, 2004, 12:45:43 am »
Heh, I just went back and read Trezker and MDX's. Awesome to the max. And they rhyme.
"It's like growing up reading good books or listening to good music. One good sofa breeds another good sofa; one bad sofa breeds another bad sofa. That's how it goes."

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Re:A poem i wrote..
« Reply #55 on: September 29, 2004, 07:53:48 pm »
*sniff*

nobody commented on my poem.. i feel pain inside..

fuckin awesome poem man, i wasn't here for most of yesterday so yeh, only now did i get to see it, and it rocks

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Re:A poem i wrote..
« Reply #56 on: September 29, 2004, 08:34:54 pm »
*tear falls from eye*

Thanks =)

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Re:A poem i wrote..
« Reply #57 on: September 29, 2004, 08:35:59 pm »
yeah, its good i guess, but mine sux :p

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Re:A poem i wrote..
« Reply #58 on: September 29, 2004, 08:55:59 pm »
different strokes for different blokes =)

Youres is g00d, keep at it and show meh m0reh! Sing about REM sleep!

You know enough it.. think i mite join you on that quest to get more REM sleep in my body clock.

(joins quest
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guest has changed name to MDX

  ..MDX has entered the quest.

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Re:A poem i wrote..
« Reply #59 on: September 29, 2004, 09:25:05 pm »
at 6:55 PM? tis not right