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Re:A poem i wrote..
« Reply #30 on: September 28, 2004, 09:46:21 am »
My poem page is located here.
http://www.angelfire.com/art/dumlesoft/Thoughts.html

Story of liberation

My country of beauty, a wonder of grace,
with mountains, meadows and life at free pace.
Outside of this eden dark forces reside.
Our relics of freedom from evil we hide.

May the gods protect me from the poison of fear.
May they save my body from evil decay.
Let my spirit be free and my soul burn bright.
Let my will grow strong, be a will of might.

My kingdom despair, the evil is strong.
My people dream back to when things were not wrong.
When evil took root, it poisoned our minds.
We think we are weak, our strength evil blinds.

The prayers of freedom gather at last.
Our wills of steel hold hope in its grasp.
We spread the word of a rebel force.
Salvaged souls seek comfort in our cause.

The forces of evil now think they are safe.
Now fighting eachother it blows in their face.
Our forces of freedom see breaches in walls.
We regain the power and dark forces falls.

Our people wake up from dreams of the past.
Their pains in slavery could never last.
Our relics are freed, now freedom is here.
We recover quickly, no darkness we fear.

You have the power of TIME ON YOUR HANDS. -Laser
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Re:A poem i wrote..
« Reply #31 on: September 28, 2004, 01:58:34 pm »
i cant work nder these conditions :P

Neither  can i! I demand a drum machinae dample


Dum-di-di-dum-di-di-dum-dum-dum-dum-dum, doosh

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Re:A poem i wrote..
« Reply #32 on: September 28, 2004, 06:34:58 pm »
interpret it how you can, experiment, try different tunes etc.. thats what being a musician is about - playing around til you get it right :)

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Re:A poem i wrote..
« Reply #33 on: September 28, 2004, 09:15:12 pm »
We have lots of potential in here. Wouldn't it be great to start a machinae lyrics contest? Like they can use them if they want to?

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Re:A poem i wrote..
« Reply #34 on: September 28, 2004, 09:20:38 pm »
A song about war:


BOOM BOOM BOOM BOOM
BOOM BOOM BOOM BOOM
BOOM BOOM BOOM BOOM

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Re:A poem i wrote..
« Reply #35 on: September 28, 2004, 09:28:15 pm »
I honestly can't remember. I think its something about riding, and I think the last line is 'I have you' or something along those lines.

Or you could translate it 'I 0wn you'  ;D

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Re:A poem i wrote..
« Reply #36 on: September 28, 2004, 09:36:22 pm »
A song about war:


BOOM BOOM BOOM BOOM
BOOM BOOM BOOM BOOM
BOOM BOOM BOOM BOOM

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SoAD?

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Re:A poem i wrote..
« Reply #37 on: September 28, 2004, 09:42:05 pm »
No, it's from Blackadder! (the sitcom)
« Last Edit: September 28, 2004, 09:50:45 pm by Laser »

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Re:A poem i wrote..
« Reply #38 on: September 28, 2004, 11:12:32 pm »
ESCAPIA - by Chris Geehan (Angelblade.)

Falling up and climbing down,
This smile faded thrice and cometh do frowns,
So shoot me now, ill bleed and ill heal,
Fates rip and tear, broke is loves seal.
My tears are worn out, so what should i do..
Repeat this hell? In flames, wait for you?
I have a love, for you that is deep..
But this pain is so much, and on me it reeps.
Just leave me be now, ill stay lone for good,
I am world hater now, weak is the hopeful mood.

Ill take mountain highs and spend days a far,
Where pain and friend shells, nay leave deep mind scars.
So with sworn oath of one, ill surf clouds, fall undone,
And in end i shall seek, the pinicle, the peak..
Of what i know not and of evil it may be,
But of freedom thats true, longing yes, to be free.
Christ bears his children, his sins and our souls,
For us just to taint life, into depressing black holes,
Can i go now, tattoo life behind?
Stains on my back of times when i was blind.

Sirens are calling and ill follow their lead,
Wherever it may take me, away from this creed..
A clan that is hurting, what is true inside,
This pain i must release, new hope to confide.
Run away, run away, and spend new born hours,
On planets of tranquil, slept moons and stars,
Clouds not to roam here, just pale green skies..
A place i can call home, lay down and die.
I've reached my peak and tasted dirt,
It all plays out the same,
For heaven is for heroes, and cowards burn in flames
So god can i join you, leave earth with the blame..


I have alot more, lyrics is MY main way of releasing violent anger.. i avoid hitting stuff and hurting myself because i always regret it after.. and for ME its stupid, maybe for others its a good idea.. i dunno, im just posting.. ^_^

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Re:A poem i wrote..
« Reply #39 on: September 28, 2004, 11:25:47 pm »
I used to walk around the house looking for things I could smash without consequenses when I was angry.
Now I've learned that it's no use looking for such things since I don't own any, instead I just sit down and feel the anger flow.

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Re:A poem i wrote..
« Reply #40 on: September 28, 2004, 11:32:12 pm »
Who's been so angry and fustrated that they've just burst into tears. (except from when you were a baby)

This was a while ago, I was about 14 or 15, but I was doing what Trezker said - looking around for something to break - then I stopped myself, sat on the bed and the anger just burst out and I cried for 30 minutes or so. It sdidn't help much, but at least it saved me from paying for something else I might've smashed.

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Re:A poem i wrote..
« Reply #41 on: September 28, 2004, 11:36:32 pm »
I always cry when I'm angry, but I rarely cry when I'm sad. I usually just take it out on myself. I've never broken anything though.

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Re:A poem i wrote..
« Reply #42 on: September 28, 2004, 11:36:35 pm »
ill admit that yeah ive been in situations over the last months not being about the forums that its come to a point i couldnt physically handle it nemore, and couldnt find the fulfillment high enuff for the anger inside.. so i just cried myself to sleep lol.. sounds lame. But then again, youd have to put yourself in my world to really appreciate that, i wouldnt have told you if it wasnt a big deal.. put it that way.

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Re:A poem i wrote..
« Reply #43 on: September 28, 2004, 11:37:08 pm »
Magicman: You never cease to amaze me.
What's that supposed to mean >_>

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I want whatever drugs you were on when you wrote that
I don't do [color=330000]many[/color] drugs.
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Re:A poem i wrote..
« Reply #44 on: September 28, 2004, 11:38:04 pm »
i think it was a compliment magicman..

and what drugs DO you do? =)