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Offline Fallout

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Re:A poem i wrote..
« Reply #15 on: September 27, 2004, 09:04:24 pm »
Dude good idea, get them to turn it into a song... :D please MaSu, i'll do anythin :)

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Re:A poem i wrote..
« Reply #16 on: September 27, 2004, 09:24:08 pm »
never return and claim no credit whatsoever therefore being forgotten forever and just being another nameless person? ;D don't think you'd go that far somehow...

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Re:A poem i wrote..
« Reply #17 on: September 27, 2004, 10:50:59 pm »
We have proof that Fallout's the legitimate author. Unless someone deletes the post... *looks at band-admins*

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Re:A poem i wrote..
« Reply #18 on: September 27, 2004, 11:01:15 pm »
O.o..

 i want MaSu to read my poem so i can see what they think :)

Well, I think it's very good.  :)

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Re:A poem i wrote..
« Reply #19 on: September 27, 2004, 11:07:06 pm »
Cool poem! A little angsty but then so are half of mine. The other half are bondage-related unsurprisingly  ::) I might dig some out and post em.

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Re:A poem i wrote..
« Reply #20 on: September 27, 2004, 11:11:09 pm »
I have a problem when I'm writing - usually stories. I get really well into a good story and then perversion hits me and the story is screwed because I can't write nicely anymore.

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Re:A poem i wrote..
« Reply #21 on: September 27, 2004, 11:16:17 pm »
hmm wut did u do that caused this hiatus?
I got suspended from school >_>

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I'd post a poem of mine, but they all suck. So I'll wait 'til someone else posts one. :P
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Re:A poem i wrote..
« Reply #22 on: September 27, 2004, 11:19:07 pm »
Here you are then, the only bondage one without swearing in it and made-up german sentences that are probably totally wrong but never mind.

Bestrafe Mich
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Look.
Nature left wide open.
Here, taste it.
Let me kiss your blood-stained lips.
Angel-in-waiting.
There are marks of love where your wings should be.
Do you feel that liebe?
Are you scared of me now?
I want you to hate me.
This blade is all that we have.
Badges of want that symbolise us.
Breathe.
Fast and hot as your body takes over.
Hard and firm, it never says no.
I am perfection, I am in your dreams aren't I?
This is blinding, this is why I hurt you so.
White light that fills me where I need it most.
Ich bin das reiter,
Ich habe dich.

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Re:A poem i wrote..
« Reply #23 on: September 27, 2004, 11:31:56 pm »
Okay then... the first poem I ever wrote, ever.

And The Butterflies Came Round Full Circle To Attempt At Space Again

The butterflies attempted at space one day
All gossamer wings and shiny
They were met with resistance
And quickly perished
And the butterflies came round full circle to attempt at space again.

The butterflies organized a coalition
All cold hearted and horrible
They overcame their predators
And held the world in their arms
And the butterflies came round full circle to attempt at space again.

The butterflies revealed their hearts to you
You were taken in by their lies
They have spun their web and now you're caught
As did the spider to the fly
And the butterflies came round full circle to attempt at space again.

The roaches waged a jihad
A holy war against the pretty insects
Through mass media manipulation
The roaches were ruined beyond belief
And the butterflies came round full circle to attempt at space again.

The butterflies met with conflict
Not from outer, no, but inside
Their black hearts and spider thread
Served only to reveal the pure
And the butterflies came round full circle to attempt at space again.

The internal war raged
On and on for days
In the end they all shriveled
Leaving only one pure soul left
And the butterflies came round full circle to attempt at space again.

The roaches caught the soul
"Burn him" was the public outcry
They did so, not knowing of holiness
That elusive quality granted rarely
And the butterflies came round full circle to attempt at space again.
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Re:A poem i wrote..
« Reply #24 on: September 28, 2004, 12:40:19 am »
I want whatever drugs you were on when you wrote that  ;D
« Last Edit: September 28, 2004, 12:40:36 am by Fallout »

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Re:A poem i wrote..
« Reply #25 on: September 28, 2004, 01:08:47 am »
wowo that must ahve been some amazing stuff! and wut does taht liats wto lines in valentines poem mean?
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Re:A poem i wrote..
« Reply #26 on: September 28, 2004, 01:12:50 am »
I honestly can't remember. I think its something about riding, and I think the last line is 'I have you' or something along those lines.

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Re:A poem i wrote..
« Reply #27 on: September 28, 2004, 01:15:43 am »
Magicman: You never cease to amaze me.
i no eh im amazed we survived without his posting for X amount of days
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Re:A poem i wrote..
« Reply #28 on: September 28, 2004, 03:06:50 am »
O.K. I'm back on the good PC. Here's one of my works:

Little Angel (go away...)

Chorus:

Little Angel go away...
Come again another day
The Devil has my intuition
And here I think I'm gonna stay

~end chorus~

For all of those who try to get me
My spell cannot be broken
For I have am no Little Angel you see
my name cannot be spoken

To me you all are merely peasants
And you I give a purpose.
Oppose me and it will surely be unpleasant
for I have all power over you.

~repeat chorus~

Weak and powerless?
I think not
Let me live in happiness
And give it no other thought

Life will always bring you down
And you're not really helping
You still have yet to make me frown
But I'll still send you back
To whence ye came.

Eternal Depression
It plagues me so
I just might die
You never know

The curse has me
In a lockdown/ a stand still
Only this Eternal Void
Can bend my will

I don't want you here
You damned evil Spirits
I live in constant fear
And I've shed many a tear.

Give me what’s mine
let me free
into the sands of time
the devil has entered me

Swallowed whole
Chewed up and spit out
You no longer have a role
You fight no more bouts.

Some of my lyrics. I'm ATTEMPTING to make it a song, but no dice. I'm not a skilled enough guitar player yet :-\

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Re:A poem i wrote..
« Reply #29 on: September 28, 2004, 03:52:03 am »
so no rhythem? not to the beat of anyhting? NO TABS! i cont work nder these conditions :P
The basic instincts of all guys in the wild:
1) Get big sticks
2) SMASH THE SHISTA OUT OF THINGS
3) Make fire
4) Burninate